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writingmama
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote #37941

WOOHOO JAIME!

Love the new and fun title!

You got down with the get down Smile

Can't wait to read it!

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Jaime Bengzon
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 9:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote #37943

Thank you so much, Debbie Very Happy

Sent it Wink



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PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2012 11:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote #38429

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Title: Dude Looks Like a Lady

Genre: Fool Triumphant (Undercover Fool)

Logline: When her basketball stud twin passes on a scholarship to a tony prep school, a small-town hottie dreaming of a better life impersonates him…unprepared for the gender-bending romances that follow.



Big thanks to JJ Austrian for the notes!

When I became a STC!er back in 2008, this was one the the first things I pitched to the community.

In 2010 I answered a request for readers from a Cat--and was eventually invited to join that group. The feedback led to a breakthrough and

Jaime Bengzon wrote:
Four years after this thread started and five months after whittling down the 190 page Hemingway draft to a manageable length of 106 pages, it's done Laughing


Still a lot of work needed, but I'm totally stoked because...

As of this morning I'm a Writers Boot Camp Fellow with this Very Happy

Couldn't have gotten this far without Blake and the Cats and I wish he was here to see it. Crying or Very sad

I know he does, but still...



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writingmama
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 4:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote #38439

Woohoo, Jaime!

Exciting news!

I loved the last draft I read and I hope the feedback I sent helped a little!

I love the twins and I know you will do great things with this script!

Yay for Writers Boot Camp!

Get down with it!

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Jaime Bengzon
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 8:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote #38531

Thank you so much, Debbie Very Happy

Sent you a late email; I hope it got through Laughing



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PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 5:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote #38549

Yay, Jaime!

I enjoyed the latest changes!

I feel like I know these peeps now Smile

I'll get back to you with some feedback today....woohoo!

You've done an amazing job with this one!

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