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William
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 5:05 pm    Post subject: Writing a Scene Reply with quote

OK, there's a lot of chat about structure of the play. Act I, Act II, Act III, etc.

I don't seem to be able to find too many books that tell you how to write a SCENE/SEQUENCE

I have seen a couple articles or sections of a book or two that talk about it, but not much.

Does anyone have any urls to articles or refs to books that explain how to write a scene/sequence?

I know, beginning, middle, and end where the conflict in the scene rises to climax and resolution for better or for worse...yup..i would like to hear a bit more than that ... I am looking for some really nifty details and maybe a nice set of guidelines...

Blake has some nice stuff about the + and - as well as the use of conflict indicators ><

Anything else?

Anyone... ? Bueller... ? Bueller?


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crazrick
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 2:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

in his book Writing for Emotional Impact, Karl Iglesias has a nifty 20-page section devoted to analyzing the construction of compelling scenes, culminating in a break-down of a critical scene from SILENCE OF THE LAMBS, where Karl details 12 key beats thru the scene. The section also discusses the 3 basic types of scenes, use of the Emotional Palette and active dialogue, as well as other nuggets regarding the basics of crafting great scenes.

I recommend that book for starters.



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Ralph Dobbins
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 11:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The best advice I've found for writing a scene is:

Go in late. Get out early.

Good advice for dealing with your day job as well if you can get away with it.



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John J. Austrian
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 12:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bill Martell has a nice little blue book about creating great scenes:

http://www.scriptsecrets.net/products/bluebook.htm


#11 SCENE SECRETS -- Learn how to tune up your scenes, link scenes, add spice to existing scenes!

(No, I don't get anything for plugging Bill all the time. I just think that he, along with Blake, offer the most useful and practical advice.)



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writingmama
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 1:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks Rick, Ralph and John for this valuable info!

William, thanks for asking the question!

Ralph, too funny about using the Go In Late and Get out Early advice for the day job Laughing

Sounds good to me Smile

Hugs!


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Blueberries
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 2:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

There's also Michael Hauge's seminar. You can buy the DVD.

http://www.screenplaymastery.com/product_pages/005.htm



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Ralph Dobbins
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 11:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

John,
I like William Martell's stuff too. Did you follow his blog from Raindance in London? Funny stuff. Definately the sort of guy I'd be comfortable hanging out with.



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